Wow!
Wow, this is incredible. Amazing, truly amazing. I liked how like at points, he got his weapon stolen- it made it so he really sint the PERFECT hero.
Also, i suggest that you make a game based on this. If done right, it could turn out sweet. If you are at all interested, i would like to help somehow, if you didnt mind. Just a sugggestion though!
Awesome! 5/5